Hausaufgaben #3

1. ->(1) (only considering)
2. ->(2) (… to take off, the de-ice fluid …)
3. ->(1) (only … and …)
4. ->(2) (…passes, the output …)
5. ->(3) (it?)
6. ->(4?)
7. ->(1) (and, or)
8. ->(1) (Being the first step …)
9. ->(2) (… system, errors …)
10.->?

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  1. Katrin sagt:
    1. improper syntax with the adverb „only,“ solution calls for moving „only“ immediately after the verb „is considering“
    2. missing comma after the adverb „off,“
    3. improper syntax with the adverb „only,“ solution calls for moving „only“ immediately after the verb „hold“ and immediately after the words „life time of“
    4. missing comma after the verb „passes,“
    5. unclear pronoun reference because of inconsistent use of the pronoun „it,“ in the first instance, „it“ refers to the nearest noun („hydrogen“), but in the second instance, „it“ refers to the subject of the previous clause („wire“); author either has to develop consistency through the entire document or avoid the conflict by not using pronouns in such situations
    6. improper syntax with the participial phrase „Avoiding complicated multi-ordered calculations,“ one solution calls for changing the subject to „we“ rather than „equations“
    7. missing commas in the list of equipment, difficult to revise without knowing intention of author
    8. being the first step in introducing CFD, Jones had to set up conservative assumptions. (improper syntax with the participial phrase „Being the first step,“ one solution calls for changing the subject from Jones to the name of the first step
    9. missing comma after the noun „system,“
    10. improper syntax with the prepositional phrase „over all speeds,“ solution involves moving this phrase after the word „predict“

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